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Katsu Hokkaido
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| ~General Information~Name: Katsu Hokkaido Nickname/Alias: The Fallen One Weight: 175lbs Height: 6'1 Age: 23 Gender: Male Appearance: Clothing: Likes: Dislikes: People weaker then him. ~Clan Information~Clan Name: Hokkaido Clan Kekei Genkai:Saki no Aime Ability Summary: ~Rank/Village Information~Classification: Letter Rank: A or S Village:Kohona ~Skill Information~Skill Specialty:
- Main:Ninjutus
- Sub:Genjutus
Elemental Affinity:
- Main: Katon
- Main: Suiton
- Sub:Duton
Special Characteristics: Flaws/Weaknesses: ~Jutsu~C: 6 B:9 A:7 S:5 _____________ - Spoiler:
Name: Kawarimi no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range:10m away from original place. Element: N/A Description: This jutsu lets the user quickly switch places with another nearby object, such as a plant (normally a section of a log), an animal, or even another person within reach, leaving the opponent open to a counter-attack. Explosive tags can be attached to the replacement for an added surprise. Fundamentally, all ninja know this technique.
Name: Henge no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range:N/A Element: N/A Description: This jutsu allows the user to assume the appearance of another person, animal, or object. This is one of the basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy. Fundamentally, all ninja know this jutsu. The transformation jutsu is considered to be among the more difficult E-ranked techniques, since it requires constant emission of chakra while mentally maintaining the form. On top of that, the user would be, most likely, interacting with the environment. This puts much mental strain on the inexperienced ninja.
Name: Bunshin no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range:N/A Element: N/A Description: This technique creates intangible copies of the user. The clones are simply illusions and will dissipate when they come into contact with something. The illusions can be seen through by the Byakugan and the Sharingan. A person with normal eyes can also distinguish the clones from the original, since the clones will not disrupt the area around themselves with their movement (won't kick up dust, crush grass, etc.).
Name: Nawanuke no Jutsu Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range:N/A Element: N/A Description: A basic jutsu taught at the Konoha Ninja Academy, this jutsu allows a ninja to free themselves if they have been tied up.
Name: Genjutsu Kai Rank: E-S Type: Ninjutsu Range:10m (Genin) 50m (S-Rank) Element: N/A Description: Kai is a Ninjutsu technique which allows the ninja to avoid the effects of a Genjutsu illusion. After forming the needed handseals, the Genjutsu technique will not affect the ninja. The ninja can also use the technique on another individual who was unable to avoid the attack. After forming the needed hand seals, the ninja touches the one affected to end the affect of the spell.
Name: Shunshin no Jutsu Rank: D-S Type: Ninjutsu Range:10m (Genin) Land to Land (S-Rank) Element: N/A Description: This jutsu is a high-speed movement technique, allowing a ninja to move short to long distances at an almost untraceable speed. To an observer, it appears as if the user has teleported. A puff of smoke is occasionally used to disguise the user's movements. It is accomplished by using chakra to temporarily boost the user's reflexes. The amount of chakra required depends on the overall distance between the user and their intended destination.
Name: Kinobori no Waza - Act of Tree Climbing Rank: N/A Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: Kinobori no Waza, the art of tree climbing serves a dual purpose. Taking part in Kinobori Shugyou (Tree Climbing Training) helps a ninja learn how to focus their chakra. It also teaches the ninja how to run up trees and walk on vertical walls. The training helps the ninja learn how to focus just the right amount of chakra to a particular part of their body. The amount needed to climb is small but it must be precise. The feet are regarded as the hardest location to master chakra focusing. So by gaining the art of this skill, the ninja will have any jutsu available (theoretically) because they will be able to focus their chakra as needed.
Name: Suimen Hokou no Waza - Act of Water Surface Walking Rank: N/A Type: Ninjutsu/Chakra Control Range: N/A Element: N/A Description: A variation on the Kinobori no Waza (Act of Tree Climbing), the art of water surface walking allows a ninja to walk on water as if it was a solid surface. Focusing an even amount of chakra out of the soles of their feet, they can balance themselves on the very surface of the water.
Name: Ayatsuito no Jutsu - String Reeling Technique Rank: N/A Type: Ninjutsu Range: Depends on wire Element: N/A Description: Ayatsuito no Jutsu is a Ninjutsu technique utilizing wire. This string can be used in rappeling, or as a method to tie down and restrict the movement of an opponent. The Uchiha clan also utilizes the wire in their Sharingan Soufuusha Sannotachi technique. The wire allows the clan member to pin down an opponent, and then unleash a torrent of fire upon them.
Name: Bikou Ninjutsu - Shadowing Stealth Technique Rank: E Type: Ninjutsu Range: 10m away from target Element: N/A Description: Bikou Ninjutsu is the technique ninjas use to follow their targets covertly. The manner in which the ninja shadows their target can differ, from the basic hiding under a nearby object, to using a jutsu to turn oneself invisible. Bunshin Daibakuha (Clone Great Explosion) Name: Bunshin Daibakuha, literally "Clone Great Explosion" Type:Ninjutsus Rank:A Element:N/A Range: Short{0-5 m} Description:This jutsu works in combination with the Kage Bunshin no Jutsu (Shadow Replication Technique), and basically creates a Shadow Replication that will also explode on command, potentially killing or injuring those caught in the blast. ~History/RP Sample~History/Background Story:- Spoiler:
Academy arc: His time at the academy wasn’t as long as most people as long as most people wanted him to believe. Being a year younger then the rest of his class mates was a blessing and a curse, Due to the fact that he quickly pull out in front of them in all forms of ninja arts. His class members didn’t not like this, teasing and making fun of him. He didn’t really to much care about them after talking to his mother and quickly learning that they were just jealous of him being so gifted and skill at his young age.
Even after school was let out he use to train with his father and sometime his mother, alone they were never together training him, his father felt that his mother trained him to lightly and if she was there, she would make him go easier on katsu while they were training,and his mother believe that the father trained him to Rigorously, and that his training with him, would be the death of there son, she knew he would think she was training him to lightly and force her to train him harder, something she did not want to do. But in the end both of there ways and methods of training would help him out in the future.
His teachers were pleased with his progress and his will to never give up on something he had started on, he had a go getter attitude towards everything he put his mind too. He was no different then his brother before him, they knew great things would be come of him because of the way he seen life, and even though the kids teased and made fun of him until they all graduated he knew that if he was one anyone of there teams they would be grateful to have him. His teachers and family felt that he would one day shine for this village. Something he took to heart upon hearing it from his father , mother, and his teachers.
Post Academy arc: “Its time” Katsu looks at the academy one last time as he turned around and started heading towards his family’s house, as he walked he started thinking back to him and his father’s conversation upon him going to join the academy a year earlier then he was suppose.
“ Katsu you know I’m doing this for your own benefit I see things for you, that I didn’t see from your brothers, that’s why your going in earlier then your brothers”. katsu sat there watching his father pace up and the down the floor, listening to every word that flow out his fathers mouth, hearing this from his father made him feel special, he guess that he was some how different then his brother’s but didn’t know how. “ But father aren’t they going to be upset after finding out you are doing this. Katsu father pause for a second and looked at his son, a warm smile came across his face.” of course not I’m the clan leader, what I say is law.” The way his father said though words , so passionate and powerful, it made him shake a little with excitement. “ but off that right now, listen to me after you graduate from the academy , you must come back here, so you can take your first step into your life as a Hokkaido clan member. Remember without doing this you can not truly be called a genin until you take the first right of passage…………”
That seem like it was just the other day his father had told him this, It didn’t take him to long to reach his father’s estate. He stop and stared at the estate for a second, it had been sometime since he seen it, and even now it still looked amazing a little out placed in the area it was in like one tree in area surrounded by sand. Katsu smiled as he open the large doors that stood between him and the entrance into the house, as he pushed the door slowly swung open as light from outside where katsu stood, flowed into the darkness of the houses, as the light hit every open corner of the now know living room of the house. As the light hit the back end of the living room, a shadow stood out to the side of a huge chair in the living room. “ so you made it…” A deep powerful voice said behind the chair. Katsu looked over towards the chair. “ Yes I’m here”.
The figure that was sitting in the chair rose to his feet as the chair vanished into thin air. The man stood hovering over 6 feet tall. His arms were the side of katsu head as well as the man calves and thighs. It was easy to see we was well skilled in taijutsu. Katsu looked around the area as he quickly started to see charka particles in the air. The man turned to face katsu his blue eyes shined brightly with four blades extending outward as it was slowly spinning. Katsu took a step back. “ its been a while……….. Father….” The figured step forward deactivating his eyes. “ Welcome katsu my son, its been to long………… but we can catch up on good time later, we both know why you are here, so come with my so we can get this started and over. You have more on your plate in the near future then you realize my son”. After saying this his father turned away and started walking towards the back entrance of the living room, giving off a feeling that katsu should follow as he did. As his father walked out of the back door, it didn’t take them long to reach the shrine in the back. Kaysu stood at the door as his father walked in first, about 5 mintues laster, he could hear his father telling him to come. He did as his father told him to. He walked in the shrine was smaller then it appeared on the outside filled with different size candles all lit up.” Katsu come kneel here”. Katsu looked over to where his father was and walked over, dropping to both knee he looked at his father, As his father activated his dojutsu. “ This is the dojutsu of our clan, one of the most powerful and feared dojutsu of its kind” His three blades slowly starting to spin.” you are about to be given these eyes………..” katsu father voice travels off as he feel his body start to get a little heavy.
He blinked and appeared in awhile different area. The place was quieted and dark. Katsu couldn’t see anything in front of him. Until it seem like someone flipped a light switch and the room became bright as he now realize it wasn’t different then being dark. The room was all white there was nothing in it. He looked left, right, up , and down. “ Nothing” he said looking at the floor.” Katsu…..” The small but yet powerful women voice was heard, he knew that voice, as he lifted his head there stood his older sister. She looked at him her purple eyes seem to stare right into his soul. Katsu still on the floor rose to his feet as his sister got closer and closer to him. She smiled at him now being only a foot away from him extended her arms out towards him” Come with me katsu” katsu looked at her with a disbelief face.” Impossible your dead nina, aren’t you??” . His sister said nothing but kept her arm extended out, jerking it a little to still in form katsu to grab her hand. Even though he didn’t want to, katsu reached out for her hand and placed his in hers, as she firmly grasped it, as everything once again changed.
He was now in a forest. He couldn’t tell what forest, all he knew was that he was running, leaping from tree to tree. He looked back and seen a figure in the distances, at this range he couldn’t tell what or who it was, but all he knew was that he didn’t not want them to catch him. He leaped down from the tree coming up to a river bed. He looked into the water he see his sister looking up at him, he quickly moved back from the water and looked at his hands, these weren’t his hands, he looked down and notice breast looking back up at him.” Holy crap I’m in my sister’s body” he thought to himself now looking back, as he heard something in the tree’s “ I finally caught you nina…..” A voice said as it came out the darkness, his suna head band shining in the sun light. “ your darn clan ability’s make it hard for someone to keep up with you let alone catch you” Suddenly katsu was now looking at his sister, He didn’t lnow how this happened but it did. Nina smiled at the man “ Honey I wasn’t running from you, so you couldn’t catch me I ran from you to keep this hiddened from someone.” The man began to laugh” From who everyone in your village knows, and so does every one in your clan, that’s why your father disowned you and you were exile from your village and clan, you’re a traitor you always have been and always will be”. Nina gave off a light smile” maybe to you, but to and everyone else I don’t care about, But to one person I’m not and as long as he doesn’t think I am then that’s all the truly matters”, The man smiled faded as he spoke” You are a loser nina, your worse then trash, at least there a place for trash….” The man trailed off as he pulled out his huge sword. Nina let out a small sigh.” Get this over with, I have other things to do with my time”. The man grinned “ No…… no you don’t.” The man jumped into the air coming down hard with his sword, Nina just stood there extended her arms to the side ready to take in the embrace of the sword to her body. Katsu looked on and try to yell stop, but when he opned his mouth nothing came out. As the blade nearly slice her body in two, It slowly fell to the ground one eye looking in katsu direction and the other looking at the river she laid next too. Katsu fell to both knees crying for his beloved sister, as the man began to laugh” She was pathetic, trying to live a lie for a nobody” Katsu body started to glow a light blue as his charka started to become visible as all of it seem to head straight to his eye’s, he gave off another loud cry as his eyes lit up a bright blue as one blade began to appear out of his iris.
His father had release the genjutsu as soon as katsu eyes began to glow. Katsu reappeared back in the shrine, His father standing in front of him, he could barely see his father, as he seen was arrows going every which way, as the candle in the shrine seem to go out every time an arrow went over it. Katsu looked lost. “ What is this that I am seeing”. he muttered. His father just chuckled a little. “ well you did better then your brother’s and sister, and you actually ask the right question, for the first question and not the nineth or tenth question, what you are seeing are wind currents” His father spoke as Katsu looked at his hands and watched as the wrround went up, down and around it as he felt the wind touching his skin.” Though arrows show you which way the wind is blowing, thus helping you used your weapons and different kind of jutus” katsu just smiled a little “ This is awesome father” he said in an excited toned. His father grinned widely “ indeed it is son………… indeed it is, try deactivated them”. katsu looked back up at his father” O…….. OK” He said as they slowly deactivated, He was almost blind when he deactivated them” father……….. How come…….” before he could finshed his statement he slipped into an unconscious state, falling to the floor. Katsu’s father walked over o him. “ guess you used more charka then I had first thought
Genin Arc: As a genin he was placed under the watchful eye of a jounin he was an squad 2, Though his squad didn’t look like much and the fact that he was still the youngest out of his squad even though graduating first in his class, he was still looked down upon even by his jounin sensei who stood by him or near him on everyone of there mission.
At first katsu thoughthe had made a great impression on his sensei, but quickly started to realize after a few mission that he wasn’t really seeing any attack, every time something happen his sensei told him to stand back and watch or to try and make him feel like he was doing something watch the rear. This made him slowly start to dislike his sensei and his squad members, because when this was said or done they would just giggle to each other and take off with the sensei into the heat of battle leaving katsu to sit around kicking rocks and playing with his kunai.
It lasted for a few mission until one mission came along, and they told katsu to go get some tree sticks and stuff to help keep the fire lit, even though he didn’t like the idea of doing little kiddy stuff, he had to listen to his so called sensei. In his own mind while getting the sticks and other things that could keep the fire lit he vowed to himelf self when he became a jounin he would not do the samething his sensei isdoing to him now. With that being said he walked back to the camp site with the sticks and twigs in his hands, only to hear the sound of metal to metal clashing upon each other. When he had arrived back to the camp site he seen that his squad members and his sensei had been ambushed by some badits. He was about to go help but remember what his sensei had said to him a mission ago, and he just smiled and mubbled” I’ll watch the rear” he turned away from what was going on, but it didn’t take him long to start feeling bad for them. He turned back around to see a badit going in for the kill on one of his fellow squad members. She closed her eyes and lifted her hands above her body which was now laying on the ground. She felt something ward start hitting her body. As she heard something fall to the floor hard. She open he eyes to see the badit that was about to kill her on the floor with a kunai in the right side of his head in the temple. An instinted death. She looked around and seen that her other squad member was still trying to fend off to other badits and her sensei was surround by 5 or 6. She looked over her shoulder to see another one coming from behind her with his sword aready lifted she knew an this position she was dead meat. But in a split second almost like a flash of light appeared and there stood katsu coming down with a hard slash to the man right arm, taking it completely off. The man doubled over in pain, and with almost no remorse, katsu thrusted the blade into his chest right threw the heart. He looked over to his fallen comrade. And gave her a sweet smile as he turned away to go aid his other squad member.
After that mission his sensei had realize how skilled he really was, and put him has lead when he wasn’t around. Even though the other two member didn’t like the fact that they had to take orders from someone younger then them they felt a little at peace knoing that his combat skills were unmatched between them, and little did he know it after that misiion he had gotten himself his first rival.
Chuuin Arc: The Chuuin exams was nothing like he heard it was going to be. It was 50 times harder. The first part of the exam were rather easy taking a written test. This was part was almost to easy, the question was Rather easy, well to him it was anyway. Even though he always had a feeling someone was trying to take answer from his paper, he did a quick hand seal unknown to the men watching him of course, and canceled out any form of jutus that would be use upon him to cheat off of him.
The second and third part of the exams were the true test of his skills came into the play first having to conquer a maze like building with traps and hidden ninja aiming to take you and your team mates out of the exam for good, but his training with his father came into play hear, cancelling out everything but the stuff he needed to hear help with surprise attacks and traps that were set to catch them off guard. He enjoyed showing off his skills and what not to people that didn’t believe he would even get this far along in his ninja life. The third was pretty much the hardest now he had to put not only his skills and knowledge, but also his combat ablitles were put to the text hear, Now fighting against not only people from his graduating class which he enjoyed but fighting against others who had graduated a year or two before him, and other ninja from other villages with special skills and clan jutus to add to there deadly combat skills, almost being defeated in the first two rounds, his last battle was probably the best and longest one he ever had fighting against a genin form the sand village, he had a nice clan jutus which allowed him to harness water from anywhere even from his and katsu own sweat. It was a battle of counters that lasted for a long time at a stalemate from katsu refused to lose coming this far and was force to use his last resort jutus. This came at a surprise to not only the people watching but to his oppenent as well, easily being over taken by the jutus. Winning the battle in the fashion that he did madeit easy for them to make him a chuuin.
As a chuuin he was selected to be part of a special chuuin task force, This selected group was not part if the anbu task force more of just a secret task force that aided when they were called upon by the tsuchikage and no one else. in which katsu spent most of his chuuin days apart of this squad. Doing special task and assassnation. Under the watchful eye of the tsuchikage. He quickly started to like being in this squad, he was quickly selected to be the new squad capatin as the one before him had died on a failed attpemt to take off a royal figure who was giving problems to the village, of course this person didn’t not find out who it was that wanted to kill him, unstill later when katsu became captain and took him and his guards out in a mist of the night.. Even though no one in the village beside the ninja knew of this eilite squad of chuuins, he was always looked highly upon by his peers and the villagers due to the fact that he was one of the few ninja, that would help out in a task when it was said that a ninja would not be needed to help or defend a group of people when they were doing things. Most of the time he wasn;t needed but just having him there put the workers at ease when they were trying too to or build something in the middle of the night. This fame made him one of the first selected to become a jounin. That and his unmatched skills in knowledge and combat.
Current Arc:Current arc:He was promoted to jounin status a few months ago, This was a great feeling to katsu, due to the fact he had more power and rank, and was rarely question on what he was doing in a area, he could leave the village when he wanted to as long as it was for good reason any time he wanted, also having people know he is of that great and the way they look at him in respect was a great feeling still be only 17 and had come so far in his years as a ninja he was just honored to be where he was and still able to do what he loved and protect the people he cared about, this was a feeling that was unrivaled by anything.
After his promotion to jounin the chuuin task force was quickly disbanded, due to the fact they were no longer needed and didn’t have anyone who stay captain longer then a few missions. Becoming a jounin was a long awaited passion for him and one of his more higher goals he had set, now finishing that goal he placed another in it place that will probably take just as long as his previous goal was. He now looked forward to see what this jounin life had in stored for him. Whatever it was he knew he would have to take it head on like he had always done.
After coming back from a mission he had gotten word that the kids had graduated from the academy and were about to be assigned to there own squads and jounin to mentor them. He thought back to his days as a genin. A big smiled came across his face. As his tan cloak blew in the air now showing what he was wearing underneath it. Katsu looked around and seen a stand in the distance, He started to make his way towards it as the sweet smell of ramen feeled his nose. He walked up to the man as the man smiled and nodded to him” the usual Katsu?”. Katsu nodded letting the man know this is what he wanted. As the man slid the bowl of ramen down to him he thought to himself” I wonder who will be picked to be the squads sensei’s this year” He chuckled to himself while breaking the two sticks that were connected to each other and began slurping down his noddles.
Roleplay Sample:- Spoiler:
Katsu Sits in his throne like chair allowing his arms to rest upon the arm rests of the chair, As he now looked down upon the man that is now bound in chains resting on both his knees, with two Hokkaido members next to him both holding spears in front of him in an “X” like fashion informing him to stay put where he was. Katsu raised his hand slightly in the air and quickly placed it back down to rest upon the arm rest again. This made the two member stand at attention moving there spears’ away from the the man bound in chains. Katsu looked to the left and seen 2 Hokkaido elders standing next to his chair, he then looked to the right and saw two more elders standing there.” This must be serious for so many elders to come its usually one or two” He thought to himself now turning back to the man that is bound in chains.
“ This man has been accused of trying to kill a Hokkaido Clan Elder for denying him the right of passage to go into the rare third stage of our clans Genkei.” Spoke one of the elders, the crowd of at least 30 to 50 other Hokkaido members from varies villages who had come to see this booed and hissed at the man in chains, showing there disbelief and shock at the fact he would do something like this.” How will you try this man Clan leader”. katsu looked around in a way to show as if he were looking for the clan’s leader, then quickly turned back and looked at the elders looking at him.
He had quickly forgotten he was this said clan leader. He looked around the crowd as he seen about half of there eyes had activated the clan Dojutus. He looked around a little more scanning the crowd. “ Yup the highest is the second stage”. he realize that most of them were still in stage one of the clan dojutus and a hand full were in stage two but none of them has reached stage three. He shrugged as he once again look down upon the man, who he could tell was clearly guilty of the crime. The crowd started talking very loudly demanding that he give this the man the ultimate punishment for his disobediences to the clans’ rules and by laws. The crowd began to get louder and louder as katsu just sat there thinking to himself. The elder and the guards that were posted around the small area of past tried to clam them down, but to no avail, this just made them more ruthless as they got closer and closer to the two guards who had now made a blockage between the man and chains and the crowd who was slowly turning into a mob. All of them had there dojutus activated and with there katana and swords in hand they wanted to do something since the so called leader didn’t want to do his job.
Katsu looked up now broken out of his own thoughts about what to do, sees the crowd coming into make a move on the man who was now begging for his life. “ ENOUGH!!!!!!!” Katsu yelled as he activated his sleeping dojutus as two blades slowly appeared forming in his eyes before slowly splitting to make a third blade. Almost instantly the crowd stop there approach to mob like people, sheathing there katana and blades. Katsu now stood up off his throne and walked down the few steps with the 4 elder walking behind him almost shadowing him. It took only a minute but to everyone there it felt like hours, as every step closer brought more and more tension in the air, you could also feel it a the crowd stood on the edge like they were back up on a cliff with no there to go. The charka that was being emitted from Katsu body was nothing like any of them had every felt. And for most of them seeing the third blade in the pupil as it was now slowly spinning was breath taking a first for almost all of them but the elders who also have the third blade, But for some reason it was more menacing in Katsu eyes, maybe for the fact that his charka level was probably beyond that of the most of the elder, which pretty much made him the heir to the throne.
Katsu now stopped only a few feet away from the man, now glazed at him with his eyes almost forcing the man to activated his own eyes, katsu now see that he had only two blades grinned evilly. “ The top punishment for this kind of crime is using the tower of sorrow to pretty much destroy your mind but…..” katsu now stepped in front of the man to now talk to the crowd that was there. “ but doing this is what he exactly wants, he came before me knowing that that would be his punishment , that’s why he did what he did. So he can come here and be hit with the genjutus survive it and go into the third stage of the clans dojutus gaining the ability to learn new and more powerful clan jutus……” he now turned his attention towards the elders” This is the same thing my brother did, and the clan leader before you also warned you about, but you went behind his back and did it anyway…..” The crowd fell silent as they listened to what katsu was saying, the man bound in chains eyes widen with fear as he realize his plans had been quickly figured out by one of the clans most youngest leaders. “ Thus causing him to go into the third stage after a few months and then taking it a step passed that in the fourth stage killing our beloved clan leader…..” Katsu went silently for a second thinking about how his brother killed there father. “ and then disowning our clan leaving never to be seen again”. Katsu now looked at the chained man who had begun to sweat. “ I maybe young but I’m no fool, no….. you won’t be killed that way, you will be killed the old fashion clan way.” katsu now looked toward the guard as he handed him his sword. Katsu quickly unsheathed it and placed it to the side of the man’s next.” Don’t worry your death unlike the pass will be quick and painless….. For the most part anyway” Katsu now rose the sword in the air, and came down with pull strength aiming for the man’s right arm.
You could hear the sword ripping threw the flesh and cutting right threw the bone. As the man arm felled to the floor, he yelled in extreme pain, he doubled over trying to hold back more screams that wanted to rip there way threw his lungs. Katsu nodded as the guards lifted the man back up right. As katsu once again raise his arm into the air and came crashing down upon the man left arm. As the air danced in the air and blood oozed from both side of his body. He was about to pass out from the extreme pain, as one of the guards did some quick hand seals and place where hand on his right calf as he placed it there you could here the sizzling of flesh and meat. This shocked the man and snapped him back to reality has he screamed at the unbearable pain he had to take in. His bode began to shake violently. As katsu now slashed the sword in a horizontal like way, as the head of the man in chained flew off with ease as it rolled next t the nearest elder foot as the Dojutus began to slowly fade away, bring back the normal eye color of the man. The elders looked at Katsu who now handed the guard back his sword while thanking him for allowing him to use it. Turned to the guards nearest the body and body parts and ordered them to clean the messed up as he turned away with a devilish smile on his face, deactivating his dojutus. “ This meeting is now over, I thank you all for coming here for this, and I wish you save travel back to your respected villages, Until we have another trial or something of great importance comes up.
With that the young leader exit the chambers and quickly removes his Hokkaido clan leader robe off, and had the traditional Hokkaido clan cloths on, with his Village headband wrapped around his left leg. He wrapped the green head band back around his head. As he walked off into the village market place. To the village he was just another great jounin, they knew nothing of him being the Hokkaido clan leader, they only knew he was a member of this rare and secretive clan, and he wanted to keep it that way.
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| Okay, before this is even -looked- at..read the rules please. If you did at all, and the banned jutsu, you'd see you'd have at least half your jutsu need to be removed.
Also, Lightning Illusion Flash of Lightning Pillar is a genjutsu. | |
| | | Katsu Hokkaido
Posts : 11 Join date : 2011-07-28
| Subject: Re: Katsu Hokkaido WIP Fri Jul 29, 2011 12:58 am | |
| I thank you for adding your comment on here, bgut as it was stated this is a WIP, i clearly put that on there so this wouldn't be looked at, this is a rough drift, most of though jutus were going to be removed anyway. Once again i thank you for your comment but until WIP is remove off of my character, I will like it if you DON'T ADD ANY COMMENTS.
Thank you in advance Neon | |
| | | Katsu Hokkaido
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| Subject: Re: Katsu Hokkaido WIP Fri Jul 29, 2011 1:06 am | |
| Sorry to double post, but i relieve i am done with everything here,for the most part i believe anyway. Since neon was the first modd to jump on here and check it i would prefer him to come look at it, but if there any other mods who want to as well i'm fine with that as well.... | |
| | | Neon Konoha Jounin
Posts : 120 Join date : 2011-07-18
| Subject: Re: Katsu Hokkaido WIP Fri Jul 29, 2011 1:18 am | |
| False darkness is Ninjutsu, the other S is Genjutsu and both are A-rank.
Lightning destruction uses Chidori, which you don't have. Taouza is just like Tsunade's jutsu, so without medical you wouldn't be able to use that.
Most of your lightning jutsu use Raiga's Kiba swords, those are banned so remove those please.
Also, akatsuki is full. Make your level A and find a free village please.
Running fire is like a B-rank at best.
I'll see if there's anything else, but for now edit those, thanks | |
| | | Katsu Hokkaido
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| Subject: Re: Katsu Hokkaido WIP Fri Jul 29, 2011 1:39 am | |
| actually lightning destruction isn't using chidori, its is a normal base lightning jutus, it actually has been use by someone who has no knowledge of the chidori, the person name escapes me right now but i will look into it if needed, and the touza jutus does not require any medical background at all, but if you feel as though it does i will remove it.
Also which lightnign moves are you talking about that needs the kiba swords to use, cause i haven't spotted any.
Also as far as the Akatsuki go Death take me permission to create one since and i quote" Since the one of the people i wanted to make one isn't going to show.......... Sure go ahead" I'm not 100 percent sure it was said like that lol but he did give me permission. | |
| | | Neon Konoha Jounin
Posts : 120 Join date : 2011-07-18
| Subject: Re: Katsu Hokkaido WIP Fri Jul 29, 2011 2:10 am | |
| http://naruto.wikia.com/wiki/Lightning_Destruction It uses Raikiri. Kyuu no jutsu is obviously Raiton Raikyuu no jutsu as it has the same effect with an edit saying hands instead of swords, they use the kiba sword so please remove it. Same goes for lightning burial Thunder Up is used throught the stone of gelel which..well you don't have so, removal too please. Lightning illusion flash of lightning pillar is GENJUTSU and false darkness is NINJUTSU, change them around please. Also, reduce the rank to A Finally, only four Akatsuki members are allowed, that's how many we have, four. No more are being allowed, so please choose a village. | |
| | | Katsu Hokkaido
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| Subject: Re: Katsu Hokkaido WIP Fri Jul 29, 2011 8:00 pm | |
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| | | Katsu Hokkaido
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| Subject: Re: Katsu Hokkaido WIP Sat Jul 30, 2011 7:35 pm | |
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| | | Neon Konoha Jounin
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| Subject: Re: Katsu Hokkaido WIP Sat Jul 30, 2011 11:37 pm | |
| Okay seriously, are you attempting to piss me off? I'm not kidding, seriously. Why would I tell you to remove Lightning Destruction and then let you put Lightning Beast, ANOTHER RAIKIRI MOVE, in? Jesus christ..
Remove lightning beat as it is a raikiri move, remove thunder up because it uses the gellel stone.
Running fire is C-level, you can use it as an S-rank but it won't ve any more powerful
Raiton Raikyuu is a jutsu used by Raiga with the Kiba swords; You can't use them without the kia swords, and Kiba kyuu is a jutsu which is used after this. Please remove Kiba kyuu | |
| | | Katsu Hokkaido
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| Subject: Re: Katsu Hokkaido WIP Sun Jul 31, 2011 5:46 pm | |
| Lol my bad Neon, i'm going to put this back as WIP i no longer have interested in making in Uchiha, Thought of something else i want to do and i know its going to take me awhile to do sinve i need approve for a few things.... | |
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